See Below for my opening to a mystery / murder novel I am working on. What happens when a serial killer takes the life of a mob bosses granddaughter? Can the police solve it before the city is drowned in violence as the underworld begins its own man hunt. Love to hear from any other writers or anyone really! Anna looked at herself in the mirror, she had only put her little red thong back on, she was glad she wore it today, he seemed to have liked it. Her hair was a mess but other than that she was pleased, with what looked back at her. She turned to one side then the other, sucking in her tiny tummy. It had taken her a long time, years of work and diet but she now had the body she dreamed of all her life. It had taken careful eating and hours in the gym but it was worth it. The man in the motel room had seemed to love it. A year ago no man would have randomly chatted her up and then taken her to a motel room. It was a skeezy motel room no doubt, but it did kind of add to the wh...