Edmonton Erotica

Sun dresses always did it for James. Specially when it was clear there was very little on under it. He had noticed it way back in the airport at home, where the wind had been blowing and snow had been coming down. She looked cold then, but coming off the plane in Mexico it looked perfect. She was with a group, he figured 3 maybe 4 of them. James was on his own. Last minute his friend Eric had to cancel the trip. But paying top dollar for an all inclusive vacation, James wasn't about to lose his money. He smiled at her across the baggage carousel waiting for their baggage and she smiled back but then was surrounded by her friends again. Ah well, James thought he would have plenty to look at, at the resort. So once he had his bag James headed out to wait for the bus. Like every time he was there, the bus driver offered beers and he was happy to have one in the heat. He was also happy to spot the girl on his bus. Maybe he would get a chance to say hi to her at some point this week. ...

See Below for my opening to a mystery / murder novel I am working on. What happens when a serial killer takes the life of a mob bosses granddaughter? Can the police solve it before the city is drowned in violence as the underworld begins its own man hunt. Love to hear from any other writers or anyone really! Anna looked at herself in the mirror, she had only put her little red thong back on, she was glad she wore it today, he seemed to have liked it. Her hair was a mess but other than that she was pleased, with what looked back at her. She turned to one side then the other, sucking in her tiny tummy. It had taken her a long time, years of work and diet but she now had the body she dreamed of all her life. It had taken careful eating and hours in the gym but it was worth it. The man in the motel room had seemed to love it. A year ago no man would have randomly chatted her up and then taken her to a motel room. It was a skeezy motel room no doubt, but it did kind of add to the wh...